Zuma Moon

[zuma moon]

001. NAME• Zuma
002. NICKNAME• Zu Zu
003. REAL AGE• 30
004. HOW OLD YOU LOOK?• 24
005. BIRTHDATE• 9/22/1910
006. WHERE YOU LIVE?• Los Angeles, California
007. AND YOU FEAST ON?• Humans

001. YOUR FACE• celeb playby's name here, if applicable
002. HAIR• She has brown redish hair. That is ostly untouched. The ends of her hair is ragged.
003. EYES• Well, her eyes are like a light hazel. That are narrow. Her pupil always has a shine in them. Her eyes make you want to stare straight into them.
004. HIEGHT• Tall.

005. WEIGHT• 125 pounds
006. BODY MODS• tattoos, piercings, etc.
007. FASHION/STYLE• She's into shirts that are light and that show her shoulders. She likes jeans with designs on them. So she likes the latest things.

001. LIKES• ,
men, jeans, being alone, exploring, running, meeting new things and fighting.
002. DISLIKES•
A thing protecting a human, Something killing her own kind, hunters, open fields, water, begging, whining, trying to escape and being weak.
003. FEARS•
sun, being killed, hated from everyone, being hunted by every kind, and warmth.
004. STRENGTHS• threats, smell of humans, screams, fear from someone else and having a friend by her side.
005. WEAKNESSES• being too nice, tricking her, runnning away from her, yelling at her and telling her to do something.
006. ODDITIES• She has a braclet on her ankel that is like glued to her skin. Also, a necklace that is on her skin as well, one hair way longer then the others. She likes to lick her fangs a lot.
007. ORIENTATION• straight
008. SPECIFIC MORALS• if any
009. PERSONALITY OVERVIEW• She can be kind and nice. But she usaully on her dark side. She often plays with her food [humans] before killing them. She talks in a voice like a mother . But it's still very frightening. She talks in a gentle tone. But she never really means it. She loves the frightend screams from the humans. When it comes to werewolves that she secretly like. She threats them in a playful way. She jokes around mostly. But never really trust her. She can be very scary. When she is her eyes go dull and her body even seems scary. Her tone is scratchy and cold.. But she's not like that often. She likes being alone. She also likes the long pause when talking. It gives her a thrill. She loves a good fight. But the things she is fighting usaully run away before she could kill them. She is very energetic and loves to run. She is always negitive if she thinks it's to soft. She is a dare devil. She hates to soft things. She loves jumping off huge building. The wind in her hair the coolness around her and the thrill. She loves it all. She thinks of herself as dangerous. But sometimes if your her lover. She's sweet.

001. PARENT ONE• Dashen Eca, dead
002. PARENT TWO• Tyma Wright, dead.
003. SIBLINGS• None.
004. PETS• name and describe
005. HISTORY OVERVIEW•
Well, she was born in a farm. Everything was great . Just like a normal famiy. But when her last year of collage started. She was bitten by a vampire fleeing from werewolves. She was used as bait so he could kill them. From then on she stopped schol and drank the blood of animals. When her very old parents came to visit.. It was not a good time. She killed them and drank there blood. That's how she got a taste for human blood. She fighted alot of werewolves. But she made friends with some. She always feared someone would find out. She's been to places people haven't seen in Las Angelos. Some filled with werewolves.. She's killed many humans. But one rare day. She let a little girl live. That girl looked like her. But she couldn't take her to the vampires to raise her. So, she took the girl to the werewolves for them to raise her. She spies on the girl that was now a werewolf and makes sure she's properly cared for. Everytime the girl sees her.. She's scared out of her guts. But another vampire saw the werewolf and killed the girl. She was so angry she killed the vampire quickly. After that she wouldn't show herself for a week. But soon she finally reapperad and did her normal stuff. She does not trust though the vampires that looked like the vamire that killed the girl. She never thought about the wars. Before she killed a human she studied them and saw there daily scedule..

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001. ANYTHING ELSE?• questions, comments, anything...
002. ROLE PLAY SAMPLE•
Zuma walked into the Los Angeles club. She was wearing a light purple shirt. That showed her shoulders with a new pair of jeans. The music was rock. Zuma walked over to the bar and started to lean on it. She looked at all the bodies dancing to the music. In the blink of an eye the music turned slower. She saw a couple of humans. But she already had her fill. She thought humans were pathetic. They couldn't even defend them selves. Zuma walked out of the bar and sat on a garbage can right outside the door. But then she saw a booth being set up for the money to go into the club.. Zuma snickerd. She went back inside without paying and bought a drink at the bar. She took a sip of it and felt a little drousy. She then drank the whole thing. The music went to rock again and she started to join in the fun. When the club was done Zuma was drousy and tired. She climbed a oak tree and slept there. When Zuma woke up she was hungry. She carefully looked at all the people passing by and she took a human that could not talk. She carefully drained it of blood. She went back over to the club.. CLOSED. Zuma grumbled. She turned around and walked over to her apartment. She jumped onto her fluffy bed. Her bed was all purple. But with a red pillow. Her room was painted orange and she had a good sized tv. She turned on the Tv and watched a scary movie. But she wasn't scared at all. Zuma heard a bone chilling scream from the room next door. Another vampire lived there. That vampire seemed to be always killing humans. But that scream was from a werewolf. Zuma licked her fangs in amusment as the scream cracked the tv. She walked over to the room. But of course it was locked. She walked along all the ampartemnt doors and knocked. She loved it when she messes around with the humans. Then Zuma took a evening stroll..

[Ellie]

Your name is a little outlandish for a modern day role play, don't you think? Maybe just change the last name to something a little more conventional.

In the "Your Face" title, you have to follow it up with your depicted celebrity. I need an actual measured height. If she has no tattoos or piercings, put 'none' or 'n/a', if she does, please describe them. I need more on her fashion choices. Her strength are supposed to be her own personality strengths, not actions that would make her stronger, same goes for her weaknesses. If she has no specific morals, please put 'none'.

Your personality makes no sense, whatsoever, just saying. you may want to re-read that or build some better sentence structure… Same goes for your history, which needs to be A LOT longer (at least 4 chunky paragraphs).

I don't really care that you didn't put your real age, but based on your writing (and the fact that you didn't put any sort of age down, really) I can be led to believe you're really young. You might want to start off somewhere a little easier on your writing skills, develop them and your character and come back in a few years. Just a thought. If you're super confident, though, please, by all means edit your application and I'll take another look at it.

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